update literature review

1) Get rid of words like moreover, thus, therefore, may, fairly, additionally, etc

2)”The case scenario of one of the United States hospitals that were hacked, thus affecting a hospital’s activities for a week, is an excellent educational campaign awareness.”  add examples to support this statement

3)”The website prevents access to fake websites and websites harboring malware.” – this statement is vague- which/what website?

4)In the “Filtering of Suspicious Content” subheading ‘Blacklists’ word is used, before using such words explain what they mean so, explain what is a blacklist.

5)Under “Importance of Cybersecurity” subheading ‘Professionals who have pursued master’s in health informatics .. ‘ – instead of health informatics use something related to cybersecurity, add more intext citations

6)”Health insurance portability and accountability act rules (HIPAA)”- make this subheading and add how cybersecurity enforces HIPAA, add intext citations

7)”Large health organizations have fairly robust cybersecurity in the health programs to … ” this statement is vague

8)In “Health Information System” subheading add more evidence and in-text citations

9)”Strategies for Improving Cybersecurity in Health Facilities” change this subheading – sounds like am suggesting strategies. – add more intext citations

10)In “Ways to Identify Malware Attack” subheading – add more intext citations

11)In “Types of Malware” subheading – add more intext citations

12) Add more support, examples, and evidence to the paper.

13) The entire paper is lacking in-text citations. Make sure to add more in-text citations 

14)Add conclusion