stance paragraph
how do i start a stance paragraph? it’s for a compare and contrast essay. i just need the first sentence.
Introductory paragraph
Antigone by Sophocles and A Rasin in the Sun by Lorraine Hansbury are comparative. They are
both families grappling with known or unknown privilege; another way they are close is that they both
accuse or are accused by a third party. A Rasin in the Sun is about a family that gets a check for
10,000$, and several members of the family become greedy or obsessed with their ideas and dreams of
having a better life. Antigone is a story, and a sister named Antigone deciding to bury her brother, who
one of Antigones brothers left to rot after his kingdom disowned him. She is then caught burying him a
sentenced to death. At the same time, the story of Antigone is about a sister getting justice for a brother
who was deemed unworthy. A Raisin in the sun is a family who, by nature, is considered unfit is still
tried through many situations that prove their worthiness through the choices they make show how being
given choices can lead to good or bad choices and decisions.
Body paragraph 1
Accusations can cause good and bad decisions, and people make accusations to show power and
deflect fate. Kreon makes accusations against Antigone, and she makes them back, foreshadowing what
will happen to him. The younger family it ARITS make accusations to one another and other people
because they are trying to deflect their issues and decisions they decide to make. This quote is Antigone
tells her sister how the king wronged their brother. “its kreon. The way he’s treated our brothers. Hasn’t
he buried one with honor? But he’s charmed the other. Disgraced him!”(pg:13) Identifying this section
‘but he’s charmed the other, disgraced him!’ these words are tone in that the language used is strong and
to the point. In ARITS, Beneatha tells Walter that the money is mama’s and not his money. “That money
belongs to Mama, Walter, and it’s for her to decide how she wants to use it.”(pg:36) Talking about the
money shows diction, and it shows how Walter views the money and how he wishes it was his.
Another example is when Antigone tells kreon that people don’t like his ruling. “but they do. To
please you they bite their tongues.”(pg:38) These words ‘to please you they bite their tongues.” is tone
because the author shows how the people view kreon. The last example of accusations is in ARITS
when Beneatha tells mama and ruth about how she doesn’t like George. “that’s up to George. If he’s
ashamed of his heritage-”(pg:80) The words ‘if he’s ashamed of his heritage’ show diction in that it
shows a point in how George expresses himself compared to the younger’s family.
Word count:271
Body paragraph 2
Antigone, Kreon, and the younger family grapple with known and unknown privilege and
entitlement. Kreon and Antigone grapple with known privilege, while the Younger family grapples with
unknown entitlement. Antigone tells kreon that he doesn’t have that much power and that she didn’t care
that she was banished away to death.“really? By Olympos above, I hear you. And I can assure you,
you’re going to suffer the consequences of your attacks.”(pg:54) The keywords that are strong with
diction are ‘you’re going to suffer the consequences of your attacks’ because they express diction. After
all, Antigone is telling kreon a point and will surely pay for what he is doing. Showing a form of
entitlement is when Mrs.johnson tells Mama about what she read in the newspaper. “Ain’t it something
how bad these here white folks is getting here in Chicago! Lord, getting so you think you right down in
Mississippi!”(pg:100) This quote shows mood in how Mrs.Johnson says that and how the setting shows
how that’s very realistic and demonstrates how attitude affects the scene. Kreon is grappling with too
much power, and his son Hamion tells kreon that what he’s doing is wrong but won’t tell him to Kreon’s
face because that could get him killed. “Take care. You’re standing on the knifes edge of fate.”(pg:67)
This quote shows mood in how Kreon’s son is telling kreon what he is doing is wrong and how there
will be consequences, it shows perspective in how the tension is the setting and the attitude of Hamion.
The last piece of evidence I have is when Beneatha talked about her brother saying he was a fool, and
Mama wondered what she was talking about. “Not crazy. Brother isn’t really crazy yet—he— he’s an
elaborate neurotic.”(pg:49) The analysis for this quote is Beneatha saying her brother isn’t crazy, yet
shows diction in showing how Walter is starting to seem like he’s going off the rails.
Word count:322
Body paragraph 3
I
One time I was once accused of doing something I did not do and I then accused that person
back, it felt hurtful to accuse someone back but I didn’t do it so I had to. I was accused of
breaking something I didn’t break.