Military Trends Revise _ Graduate Paper

please read the attachment and revise the paper accordingly

Christina,

I’m attaching the project requirements copied from the site that I sent earlier. I know several of the other students have had the same problem with accessing the Assignments tab, and they have been able to get the IT help at UMGC to fix the problem. This will really be critical to fix as we get into the other projects.

 

For the current Project 2, the deliverable for the project is a 5-7 page, double-spaced research report in APA format. The page count does not include your cover page or references. 

 

For the content of the report, the instructions indicate that you should identify the “job code” that describes your industry based on the North American Industry Classification Systems (NAICS). The NAICS codes are similar to MOS codes in the Army. Rather than an occupation code, it seems that you wrote in the submitted assignment about a pay grade (E-6). 

 

In your discussion post, you identified three good trends that likely could be translated over into the outline of your paper: military use of nanotechnology, robotics, and drones. All of these impact the military overall. You will need to analyze each of them for why it is and important trend. Then, you will need to pick one of these to do a “deep dive” and discuss why this particular trend is important for the military. 

In short, from the instructions:

You will develop a paper that accomplishes two objectives:

• It will identify the three top trends in your industry and your rationale for your choices based on the resources you found;

• It will discuss an issue within one of the trends that you deem important, based on the current state of the industry, and will be supported by your analysis of facts and a well-reasoned conclusion of what it means to the industry.

I would delete most of what you have already about military pay and rank structure. These have not changed significantly since we eliminated the “Specialist-5” after the Vietnam War. Rather, focus on the current trends in military technology that you have already identified, and provide more substantive analysis on these points.

 

Let me know if you have any other questions or need additional assistance on this. Thanks!

BELOW IS THE INSTRUCTIONS

In this project, you will search for information that will enable you to identify three top trends in your profession or field. Over the course of the project, you will exercise information literacy skills as you locate and evaluate information, and develop well-reasoned conclusions. Reviewing the many sources available to you, you will choose those that are relevant, timely, and helpful to your quest to understand the issues of your industry. Once you have identified the top trends, you will choose one that is particularly interesting to you or one that you think is the most problematic, and research more deeply to produce an analytical research paper for your team. Your project is intended to prepare the search committee on the issue so that it is well-prepared to interview candidates. This project will prepare you for more complex research projects, as you will refine and hone your ability to create a statement of the problem and find the information you need to produce a well-reasoned, well-supported analysis.

There are four steps that will lead you through this project. Begin by watching the video above, which introduces the project as it might occur in the workplace, and then continue with Step 1: Search Techniques.

Competencies

Your work will be evaluated using the competencies listed below.

· 1.1: Organize document or presentation clearly in a manner that promotes understanding and meets the requirements of the assignment.

· 1.2: Develop coherent

paragraphs

or points so that each is internally unified and so that each functions as part of the whole document or presentation.

· 1.3: Provide sufficient, correctly cited support that substantiates the writer’s ideas.

· 1.4: Tailor communications to the audience.

· 1.5: Use sentence structure appropriate to the task, message and audience.

· 1.6: Follow conventions of Standard Written English.

· 2.1: Identify and clearly explain the issue, question, or problem under critical consideration.

· 2.2: Locate and access sufficient information to investigate the issue or problem.

· 2.3: Evaluate the information in a logical and organized manner to determine its value and relevance to the problem.

· 2.4: Consider and analyze information in context to the issue or problem.

· 2.5: Develop well-reasoned ideas, conclusions or decisions, checking them against relevant criteria and benchmarks.

Project 2: Find Trends in Your Profession
Step 2: Choose an Issue to Research Further

In the last step, you used research to identify three top trends in your industry. That was the first part of the project. Now it is time to focus on an issue within one of those trends that you think is noteworthy in your field. This project requires that you review the trends and develop a plan to research the issue further, and synthesize the information you find into a coherent, well-supported analysis. But first, you have to develop a focused 

research question

 or statement of the problem. Consider this step similar to the starting point for solving any problem with the scientific method. You first have to identify the problem. Then, when you have researched a bit more, you will form a reasonable assumption (a hypothesis) of what you think might be a potential resolution/answer. You will look for more information that reflects different sides or viewpoints of the issue, and use analytical thinking to arrive at a well-reasoned conclusion. This conclusion may or may not bear out your original first estimate; however, your quest is to arrive at an answer that is well-supported and based on facts. Remember, your objective is to consider the impact of this issue on your industry, so this may be the first step toward a practical solution for your organization.

So, choose an issue from your research on a trend in your industry that has potential for great impact on the field, and then draft a preliminary question or statement of the problem. Your research should reveal if the question has already been answered, or if there is enough information on the topic. Refine your question or statement and submit it to the “so what” test. Will your answer contribute to knowledge about the issue you have selected? Is the question answerable? Remember that in academic work you would normally avoid normative or open-ended questions, which start with the words should or would, or any question that can be answered with a yes or a no.

Once you have chosen your issue and completed enough research to provide a well-reasoned answer (or solution), you will be ready to write your issue paper. In the next step, you will draft your research paper.

Step 3: Writing your Research Paper

In the previous two steps, you performed searches, first to identify industry trends, and then for information about an issue in one of those trends that you consider to be important to your industry. Now, you should be ready to draft your paper.

This would be a good time to review

organization in writing

and paragraphs. You might also review the Effective Writing Center’s 

Online Guide to Writing

, a valuable reference to students who seek to improve their writing.

Review your task. You are to provide a research paper that provides a summary of the three top trends in your industry (with associated NAICS codes). Provide sufficient background for your reader that the trend is clear and supported by resources you have found. Review resources in 

References and Citations

 to ensure that you are using “in text” citations to give credit for the ideas of other authors and to build your credibility as a researcher, neither ignoring sources nor quoting excessively.

You will develop a paper that accomplishes two objectives:

· It will identify the three top trends in your industry and your rationale for your choices based on the resources you found;

· It will discuss an issue within one of the trends that you deem important, based on the current state of the industry, and will be supported by your analysis of facts and a well-reasoned conclusion of what it means to the industry.

Start with an outline and flesh out the main themes with supporting statements. This will become your road map to an organized paper. Draft, sleep on it, and edit. Repeat.

Your paper will be five to seven pages, not including your cover page and References page(s), double-spaced, and set up in APA standards. It does not require an abstract.

Your citations, both “in text” and in References, will be in accordance with the 

UMGC Library Citing and Writing Portal

. You may find the sample APA paper linked from the portal helpful as well.

Your headings will follow this general pattern:

        Paper Title (First level position, not bold)

        Findings (First level heading, centered, bold)

Top Trends of the _____ Industry (Second level heading, bold, flush left)

An important emerging issue in a trend (and what it means in context to the industry) (Second level heading, bold, flush left)

        Conclusions (First level heading, centered, bold)

        References (New page, first level position, not bold)

Milestone: Many students are asked to resubmit their papers based on incomplete or inaccurate citation formats. This milestone will get you off to a good start with APA citations and enable your faculty member to check your trends. By the end of Week 2, submit a shell of your paper with the following elements:

· a cover sheet in good APA format;

· a “template” for your paper that includes the headings;

· your opening paragraph that will introduce the industry, the top trends, the issue that you have chosen, and the question that you pose to answer; and,

· your draft References page.

Please use the APA style guide or References and Citations to draft your complete citations. This is an opportunity to get feedback before your project is graded. When you submit your draft References page for review, your faculty member will provide feedback on your citation format so that you can correct it for your project submission at the end of Week 3.

After your complete paper is drafted and your citations are correct, be sure to read your paper out loud to catch any extra or missing words and to make sure that it makes sense. Better yet, ask a friend to read it; if they have questions about what you mean, so might your reader!

In the next step you will submit your project for assessment.

Step 4: Submit Your Paper and Share Your Research Experience

After editing and re-reading your assignment again for errors in writing and citing, please submit your project in the assignment folder by the end of Week 3.

Also, please share your industry issue with your classmates in the Project 2 discussion area. Were there any particular epiphanies or hardships that you encountered in your research and writing process? Please feel free to interact with your classmates in any constructive way.

Check Your Evaluation Criteria

Before you submit your assignment, review the competencies below, which your instructor will use to evaluate your work. A good practice would be to use each competency as a self-check to confirm you have incorporated all of them. To view the complete grading rubric, click My Tools, select Assignments from the drop-down menu, and then click the project title.

· 1.1: Organize document or presentation clearly in a manner that promotes understanding and meets the requirements of the assignment.

· 1.2: Develop coherent paragraphs or points so that each is internally unified and so that each functions as part of the whole document or presentation.

· 1.3: Provide sufficient, correctly cited support that substantiates the writer’s ideas.
· 1.4: Tailor communications to the audience.
· 1.5: Use sentence structure appropriate to the task, message and audience.
· 1.6: Follow conventions of Standard Written English.
· 2.1: Identify and clearly explain the issue, question, or problem under critical consideration.
· 2.2: Locate and access sufficient information to investigate the issue or problem.
· 2.3: Evaluate the information in a logical and organized manner to determine its value and relevance to the problem.
· 2.4: Consider and analyze information in context to the issue or problem.
· 2.5: Develop well-reasoned ideas, conclusions or decisions, checking them against relevant criteria and benchmarks.