Introductory Paragraph Peer Review

In this discussion, you will share a draft of your case study introduction.  You will also give and receive feedback from your classmates.

Initial Post (due by 11:59 p.m. on Friday)

Post a draft of your introductory paragraph. Be sure that your introduction includes a “real-life” instance of your social issue and your thesis. Refer to the sub-module on

Writing Your Introduction

 for tips and sample introductory paragraph. Also be sure that you demonstrate all the previously covered grammar skills in your writing.

Peer Response (due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday)

Respond to at least one of your classmates and provide feedback on her/his introduction. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your response:

• Does the introduction include a clear and effective “real-life” instance?  Suggest possible revisions to make the instance more effective and clear.
• Does the introduction include a clear and effective thesis?  Suggest possible revisions to make the thesis more effective and clear.
• Does the introduction reflect all of the elements of a good introduction? If so, how? If not, why not?  Suggest possible revisions to improve the introduction.
• What other insight or suggestions might you offer your classmate regarding her/his introductory paragraph?