edit one assigbment due in 8 hours!!!
You have written an assignment before and I got some feedback. You need to edit it according to the feedback and the guide: https://www.careercontessa.com/advice/5-step-cover-letter/ And then answer four questions!!!
Answer the following questions in a separate document:
- How has your letter changed from your draft to the current version? What advice did you receive from your peers?
- What are you most pleased about in the revision?
- What would you keep working on if you had more time?
- How confident do you feel about the professionalism and authenticity you display in this letter?
The feedback: you have done a great job in writing your cover letter. Having read through the same, I think that you have done great when it comes to your introduction, the body as well as the conclusion. To make your letter outstanding, I think you have to add some of the accomplishments you did while in your past internships, job,s, etc. Lastly, your cover letter should have your address section as well as your name in the closing section.
Shuyi Wu
2780 S Walnut Street Pike, Apt B 226/Bloomington, Indiana 47401
wushuy@indiana.edu/(737) 224-0202
https://www.linkedin.com/in/shuyi-wu-ab866a206/
Hiring Manager Name
Robert Half
205 N. Michigan Ave, Suite 3301
Chicago, IL, 60601-5924
(312) 801-4039
March 12, 2021
Dear Mr. Robert,
RE: A Human Resources (HR) Assistant
I do hereby apply for the above-mentioned position with your esteemed organization. I have served in various organizations as an HR assistant. I did not only help realize critical milestones that set the organizations mentioned thereof on the path of success, but also honed my skills over time; I believe that by joining your organization, I will bring on board invaluable skill set that will tremendously help embolden your organizational bottom line.
In addition, I do possess excellent written and communication skills developed over the years and more so by my studies which included common courses in communication skills. I have employed these skills recently in activities that include human resource planning; performance appraisals; as well as selection and hiring exercises.
Academically, I do possess a bachelor’s degree in Human Resource Management. Besides, I have also undertaken courses in Information Technology (MS Word, MS Access, MS Excel, MS Power point, internet). I have gained valuable competences which include research skills informed by academics and practice as well as strong familiarity with excel and other Microsoft office packages; ability to provide team leadership; good interpersonal and communications skills; ability to work independently and willingness to work as a team.
I have a passion to work for this Program to help contribute fully to your organization’s objectives.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully
*Name*