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2020/9/22 2nd Draft Paper #1

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Total Points: 5.0

2nd Dra� Paper #1

Due Friday by 11:59pm Points 5 Submitting a file upload
Available Sep 21 at 12am – Sep 25 at 11:59pm 5 days

2nd Draft Editing

Criteria Ratings Pts

5.0 pts

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This week, the 2nd draft of Paper #1 is due, and I want you to re-work your Informal Outline 1st draft
and make it better than the 1st draft in order for me to review and edit. As you should know, this will
eventually be a writing assignment of 4-6 pages, but for this week I only want to see a new and
improved version of your Informal Outline 1st draft; in other words, you will prepare only a new and
improved, well-planned 2-page maximum Informal Outline with a Works Cited page–please do not
write a full paper yet for this assignment.

Since your 1st draft was peer edited and reviewed by 2 of your fellow classmates (or by the Writing
Center), this will be my opportunity to directly help you with your assignment. I will edit, make
suggestions and positive comments, and give you instructional advice on how to make this paper
better. To receive full credit, you must turn in your outline draft on time, and you must follow the
expected MLA format rules (double space, Times New Roman, 12 point, Align Left, Full heading,
header on the top right side of every page, and a Works Cited page).

I will review them over the weekend and give you both general and specific comments to guide you in
preparation for the Final Draft due next week. One last reminder–please send this to Canvas.

You have a few days to do this assignment, so please do write and turn in your Informal Outline early,
and kindly be patient for I will have very likely over 40 papers to review over the weekend. Please do
not wait until the last minute to turn it in–it is to your benefit to be punctual and sincere in your effort
throughout our Fall semester together. Points will be reduced for any non-compliance with my
above-mentioned instructions.

2nd Draft Editing
(Professor’s
Suggestions/Commentary)

Upon completion of the 1st
draft assignment, this 2nd
draft is an updated version
that eventually will
become the Final Draft.

5.0 pts
Full Marks

The 2nd draft is on time. It
is updated and a significant
improvement on the 1st
draft. MLA Format and rules
re: font, heading, etc are
followed. Works Cited
attached. A good idea of
how to prove the thesis
along with evidence from
the work of literature as well

3.0 pts
Partial Marks

The 2nd draft is not on time. It
is not updated and not a
significant improvement on
the 1st draft. MLA Format and
rules re: font, heading, etc are
not followed. Works Cited not
attached. A good idea of how
to prove the thesis along with
evidence from the work of

0.0 pts
No
Marks

Not
turned
in.

2020/9/22 2nd Draft Paper #1

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as outside sources must be
evident.

literature as well as outside
sources is not evident.