Resume and Cover Letter
See the attached file with the instructions and notes, after that do again both documents with the respective modifications in an excellent cover letter and a resume in a word template.
A page with the cover letter and another page with a resume.
Forum: D4:L5 – Resume and Cover Letter – PART A (GROUP)
Instructions
With your group……..
· Analyze a poorly written resume and cover letter.
COVER LETTER
John Chanse
7870 Mandavi Street, Suite 349
Springs Delaware, MO 37458
March 8th, 2021
Manager
Marketing Services
76808 Milan Way
Geneva, WS 30947
Sir Stevens,
I am writing to apply suitable vacancies in your reputed organization.
I have gained my degree from university of Texas and completed Diploma in accounting. I also had an advance knowledge in D365.
As you will see from the enclosed resume, my work experience and education are clearly mentioned. I hope to transfer the skills that I have acquired over the past four years to the job in your alleged organization.
Be an asset to your respected organization by working as a team player with absolute confidence and commitment. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss, how my experience and educational background would qualify me to be a member of your reputed organization.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanks, and best regards
John Chanse
RESUME
Profile
Oriented team player with leadership, decision making and problem-solving skill, looking for an opportunity to explore the best ability to leverage profitability and productivity.
Contact
PHONE: 718-987-9090
EMAIL:
mirin@yahoo.com
COMPUTER PROFICIENCY
Certification in Accounting
Advanced knowledge in D365
COMPETANCY
Leadership Skill
Multitasking
Problem Solving
Communication skill
LANGUAGES
English – Fluent
Spanish – intermediate
French – Intermediate
EDUCATION
MBA – University of Texas
JUNE 2014 – JUNE 2016
Master of Business Administration in Financial Management & Marketing Management
B. Com – University of Chicago
WORK EXPERIENCE
Marqui Finances – Loan Manager
April 2016 – May 2016
Approve loans within specified limits and refer loan applications outside those limits to management for approval.
Apparel TUO – Administration Officer
March 2018 – May 2018
Overseeing sales operations, meeting targets, and managing the sales team in the region.
Life Insurance Group – Team Manager
February 2019 – Present
Designing and implementing a strategic sales plan that expands company’s customer base and ensure company’s strong presence.
· Make corrections to both documents.
-Cover letter does not start with a proper salutation.
– Cover letter should close with a signature, here he closes with just his name; he should close with his name and business information.
– The document does not follow a professional format.
– The resume should contain a headline with the applicant’s name.
– The competency section should be arranged properly in bullet points in a concise manner.
– The work experience section should be arranged in a chronological manner i.e. the latest work experience should be added first in the work experience section.
– At the end of the resume, there should be interest areas and any hobbies to be added
– Competencies should be expressed in greater detail.
– Typing speed should be shared under competencies, especially since the occupant has a profession in Accounting.
– Manager/ Supervisors contact information should be listed under the occupant’s position in “Work
Experience
“.
– Should have provided more information regarding his educational achievements.
· Revised document to this discussion forum.
John Chanse
7870 Mandavi Street, Suite 349
Springs Delaware, MO 37458
Mathew Stevens
Geneva, WS 30947
789-678-9078
mstevens@bellsouth.net
March 8th, 2021
Dear Mr. Stevens:
I am writing to apply suitable vacancies in your reputed organization. Comment by Loubeau, Marie: Revise this sentence for clarity. Same comment for below sentences
I have gained my degree from university of Texas and completed Diploma in accounting. I also had an advance knowledge in D365.
As you will see from the enclosed resume, my work experience and education are clearly mentioned. I hope to transfer the skills that I have acquired over the past four years to the job in your alleged organization. Comment by Loubeau, Marie: Enclosed is a copy of my resume for your review. I have …. X years of experience….. and I hold a …. Degree. The experience and skills that I have acquired over the… make me an ideal candidate for the position. I would like the opportunity to meet with you in person so that I cold elaborate more on my work experience. Comment by Loubeau, Marie: Revise this sentence for clarity. This is a professional and formal letter to solicit a job.
As the attached resume indicates, I would be an asset to your respected organization by working as a team player with absolute confidence and commitment. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss, how my experience and educational background would qualify me to be a member of your reputed organization. Comment by Loubeau, Marie: Consider revising this paragraph as well.
Sincerely,
John C.
John Chanse
John Chanse Comment by Loubeau, Marie: Change font size to 12
Use the same font throughout the paper.
7870 Mandavi Street, Suite 349 · 718-987-9090
mirin@yahoo.com
Experience
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February 2019 – Present Team Manager, Life Insurance Group Designing and implementing a strategic sales plan that expands company’s customer base and ensure company’s strong presence. |
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March 2018 – May 2018 Administration Officer, Apparel TUO Overseeing sales operations, meeting targets, and managing the sales team in the region. April 2016 – May 2016
Loan Manager, Approve loans within specified limits and refer loan applications outside those limits to management for approval. |
Education
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JUNE 2014 – JUNE 2016 Comment by Loubeau, Marie: Did you graduate? If yes, provide the year of graduation. MBA, University of Texas Master of Business Administration in Financial Management & Marketing Management |
Skills
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Leadership Skill English – Fluent Spanish – intermediate French – Intermediate |
Activities
Not known activities were provided by the applicant. Comment by Loubeau, Marie: ?